Broken Wings

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    Broken Wings

    Broken Wings 

    Your wings will not be Broken

    Soaring high up in

    The sky

    Fallen Angel

    Broken

    Wings

    Never to land

    Again

    Tell the Midnight

    Nightingale

    Sing a song of wonder

    To sleep forever more

    The wings of

    Midnight Angel

    Fallen never more

    Beautiful Midnight Nightingale

    Carries

    Broken wings

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    knight4696 commented on Broken Wings

    04-10-2010

    Blue - Very nicely written .. Poetically sound and the metaphoric images are great. :) Ken

    bluskyinthenite

    04/10/2010

    Thank you very much. Very much

    FreeBird02 commented on Broken Wings

    04-06-2010

    That has the potential of a classical poem. It has quite the similarity to one of y most favorite poets of all time, Edgar Allen Poe. Keep up the great work. FreeBird 02

    bluskyinthenite

    04/07/2010

    Well thank you very much. Not really sure what i was thinking while i wrote that. Edar allen poe. hmmm. i very much like him. Started written poetry this time last year. I like.........FreeBird

    dahlusion commented on Broken Wings

    04-05-2010

    There is poetic elegance embedded in this feathery fantasy, and the poetic aroma of each word is pure movement and lyrical bubbling. Bravo!!

    bluskyinthenite

    04/05/2010

    LOL!!! good morning....... babbling did U say. Ha . Well thank you very much. Thanks

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