Enthusiasm Fading

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Enthusiasm Fading

Some people use the sorry word
a hundreds times a day

They bottle it an say
I love you
and hurt you with dismay

Disillusioned with
"I love you "

For It has flowen out the door
Enthusiasm has spread it's wings

detached sunder
motionless
as a dancer
Suspended in mid air

 

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blackfootlady commented on Enthusiasm Fading

11-29-2010

And Honesty has not passed You by.God bless -Black P.s Saved to Favorites

bluskyinthenite

12/03/2010

thanks you for stoping by.

dahlusion commented on Enthusiasm Fading

10-21-2010

A perfectly honest write that i can relate to completely. Bravo!!

bluskyinthenite

10/22/2010

Ohhh thanks.. someone brings my feelings out @ times.

knight4696 commented on Enthusiasm Fading

09-07-2010

Blue - A very "enthusiastic" 10 from me! Quite the reflective piece .. you never disappoint ... Awesome write once again my friend! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

09/09/2010

Yeah hmmm thank you Ken. The ups and downs of life.. Why oh why can't they all be ups... Wouldn't that me different. thank you for reading

SuSpence commented on Enthusiasm Fading

09-02-2010

Wonderful write blusky! I loved the structure and the seemingly simplistic message upon first glance, but for those who look deeper there is much thought to be had. This was terrific, I loved it. I also loved the last line and how you tied the perfect picture in with the poem. 10 from me blu :) Peace and Love, ~Spence

bluskyinthenite

09/02/2010

Spence thank you. for reading my poem. Crying here need hugssss

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Enthusiasm Fading 4
Sorry is a empty word 6
Invisible 5
Break 2
Take Flight 4
Searching for my mojo 1
Nature 8
Imagine 2
Nodin's blowing 2
Sons Poem 3
Son's Poem 3
Mobile Cell phone 2
Rock me baby 5
Nebie know more 4
"this trash barrel is still on fire" 4
Total Eclipse 5
Earth's satellite 6
Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
You Don't know Me 9
Drive By 9
re: son's poem 3
RE: sons poems 1
Evolution Distruction 3
Nova 2
Twinkle In His Eye's 2
Put on hold 3
Shadow maker under me 2
Crying a River of Pain 5
Cause and effect 2
regretful sorrow 2nd 2
Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
regretful sorrow 6
the chambers of insecurity 4
I'm to blame for this 2
Into the Universe 2
Memories of contentment 2
Meticulous Imperfection 3
Storms a brewing 5
My mental turmoil my madness 3
Sands of Time 3
Narcissus 3
Steed of Steel 2
Cranium 6
Life is Poetry 4
Looking Glass 3
Broken Wings 3
Lost 2
Echo's threw my mind 1
Lazy cold cold day and here ai " Sitting here looking like this!" 1
Rest 1
Lost in the Mind 2
Love Lost 1
Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain" 2
Jalapeno Sub 3
No regrets 4
Stair master 1
Lonely for your touch 2
Rain on the Roof 2
Life’s small struggles 3
Auto Pilot 2