Narcissus

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  • Dark Poetry

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    Okay this was directed at a not so nice employer. whose totally in Love with himself. Liar Caught him in lies. I have a hard time Just letting it go. Get over it blue.

    Narcissus

    "So we sing a song of dread
    and become a man of thread
    woven high upon your head
    Calm and still remain dead "
    Shredded Poser
    You are not the cream of the crop
    Flower of discontentment
    I see your true colors
    stained and tattered
    Mangled lacerated
    shredded
    Fading to black
    Eat your peace of Pat pie
    Vicious and malicious
    Maligned with hungriness of discontent
    I see your true colors
    They're painted on the water
    of dissatisfaction
    Reflections
    In the pool
    Narcissus      

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    devaamido commented on Narcissus

    04-19-2010

    Here's the best I could do: Goebles, Rove & FOX And so we sing song of dread Becoming then a sewing thread Weaving deep within the minds, Of TV watchers’ corporate head: “Be calm and still, free enterprise Investors need to make some bread. Let corporate leaders run instead We all may then be best off dead.”
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    bluskyinthenite

    10/01/2010

    Ha ha ha ha thank for reading... Its actually about my boss. which is a ??????

    persephone commented on Narcissus

    04-18-2010

    Dealing with the frustrations of working with a**holes with pen & paper to vent is better than shooting them, yes? LOL Nice flow, well-crafted. Bravo!
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/18/2010

    thank you very much.

    MindNumbing commented on Narcissus

    04-15-2010

    I love this!! "I see your true colors They're painted on the water of dissatisfaction"... what an awesome sentiment! The anger just oozes out of this piece... great job!
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/15/2010

    thanks. yeah very anger poem. wasnt sure if i wanted to show that side of me. so glad i did. thanks for reading. Bosses can be a pain. in the Azzzzz

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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