Invisible
I see the window melting
liquefying magnifying
disintegrating before my eyes
I'm invisible to you
Left without doubt
alone to pout
In front of the window pane
Of self doubt
Invisible
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why does it have to be so hard some times... to just be comfortable with another person... without having all the baggage of they're life affect you?
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Krystle commented on Invisible
11-04-2010
- This is amazing and wonderful all the way through! You are a very talented poet! I love reading your poems and I will read them over again sometimes too. I will also tell people about your work! Nice job thanks for sharing! I hope you have a blessed day
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11/06/2010
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11/22/2010
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knight4696 commented on Invisible
09-07-2010
- Blue - I love this metaphoric write .. You've described your feelings so well and in such few words .. to make one feel what you are feeling can be difficult itself .. never mind when you try to convey it in a couple lines. You convey so well! :) GREAT JOB! :) Ken
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11/06/2010
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lorenzo commented on Invisible
08-30-2010
- i love this little poem Blue Sky...it says so much with so few wonderfully well chosen words.
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11/06/2010
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BlackButterfly1 commented on Invisible
08-30-2010
- There's a lot of meaning in this short poem. A whole lot.
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09/01/2010
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08-29-2010
- I like the comparative quality of a window to invisibility. That to be invisible is still to be something or someone. I want more. :)
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09/02/2010
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