Sorry is a empty word

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    sorry comes so easy for some people.. they use it 100 times a day.

    Sorry is a empty word



    We opened a can of worms
    I find it hard to eat.
    Touche'

     I'm sorry 
    Comes spilling out
    Which are empty words of prey

    Sorry is a useless word
     Spews from my depth abyss
    My words are deep
    Hit harder than I realize

    For the shell I once abode in
    Is here for you to see

    Invisible an lack of sunshine
    I wither an fade away

    Delete me if you must
    God Bless

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    Rainz commented on Sorry is a empty word

    11-02-2010

    Powerful! "Delete me if you must", and ending it with God Bless. I am now a fan. Keep up the good work!
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    bluskyinthenite

    11/06/2010

    god bless you. thanks

    ApaqRasgirl commented on Sorry is a empty word

    09-23-2010

    yes I can see your meaning in this on that word,,,,,,loved the way you told it in your words here.......but alas we shall not be deleting our friend..........hahaha ........loves ya bunches asha
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    bluskyinthenite

    09/24/2010

    Asha thanks for the checking me out..

    cheronld commented on Sorry is a empty word

    09-23-2010

    Ahhhh yes.....after awhile the word kinda loses its meaning.....we take it for granted and throw it out recklessly....nice write....Cher
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    bluskyinthenite

    09/23/2010

    thank you very much for reading my Poems... Thanks

    knight4696 commented on Sorry is a empty word

    09-07-2010

    Blue - it seems that Empty apologies are rampant these days. About as useful as a spoon when you're cutting steak! :) Very Nice Job my friend! :) Ken
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    SuSpence commented on Sorry is a empty word

    09-02-2010

    Another awesome write blu :) You have made me think twice in one day, this is quite an accomplishment I must admit, and rare, like Hayley's Comet Haha. It is true, words are meaningless, but the intent and the emotion behind the words is what is real. People get so caught up in words and strip them of thier meaning, and it usually isnt until some monumental event or moment of clarity that most seem to realize this. Great work! ~Spence
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    bluskyinthenite

    09/02/2010

    happy warm fuzzy feelings thank you very very much. thank you for the HUG.

    SuSpence

    09/02/2010

    *Huge Hugs :)

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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