Sorry is a empty word

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sorry comes so easy for some people.. they use it 100 times a day.

Sorry is a empty word



We opened a can of worms
I find it hard to eat.
Touche'

 I'm sorry 
Comes spilling out
Which are empty words of prey

Sorry is a useless word
 Spews from my depth abyss
My words are deep
Hit harder than I realize

For the shell I once abode in
Is here for you to see

Invisible an lack of sunshine
I wither an fade away

Delete me if you must
God Bless

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Rainz commented on Sorry is a empty word

11-02-2010

Powerful! "Delete me if you must", and ending it with God Bless. I am now a fan. Keep up the good work!

bluskyinthenite

11/06/2010

god bless you. thanks

ApaqRasgirl commented on Sorry is a empty word

09-23-2010

yes I can see your meaning in this on that word,,,,,,loved the way you told it in your words here.......but alas we shall not be deleting our friend..........hahaha ........loves ya bunches asha

bluskyinthenite

09/24/2010

Asha thanks for the checking me out..

cheronld commented on Sorry is a empty word

09-23-2010

Ahhhh yes.....after awhile the word kinda loses its meaning.....we take it for granted and throw it out recklessly....nice write....Cher

bluskyinthenite

09/23/2010

thank you very much for reading my Poems... Thanks

knight4696 commented on Sorry is a empty word

09-07-2010

Blue - it seems that Empty apologies are rampant these days. About as useful as a spoon when you're cutting steak! :) Very Nice Job my friend! :) Ken

SuSpence commented on Sorry is a empty word

09-02-2010

Another awesome write blu :) You have made me think twice in one day, this is quite an accomplishment I must admit, and rare, like Hayley's Comet Haha. It is true, words are meaningless, but the intent and the emotion behind the words is what is real. People get so caught up in words and strip them of thier meaning, and it usually isnt until some monumental event or moment of clarity that most seem to realize this. Great work! ~Spence

bluskyinthenite

09/02/2010

happy warm fuzzy feelings thank you very very much. thank you for the HUG.

SuSpence

09/02/2010

*Huge Hugs :)

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

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Enthusiasm Fading 4
Sorry is a empty word 6
Invisible 5
Break 2
Take Flight 4
Searching for my mojo 1
Nature 8
Imagine 2
Nodin's blowing 2
Sons Poem 3
Son's Poem 3
Mobile Cell phone 2
Rock me baby 5
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Total Eclipse 5
Earth's satellite 6
Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
You Don't know Me 9
Drive By 9
re: son's poem 3
RE: sons poems 1
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Nova 2
Twinkle In His Eye's 2
Put on hold 3
Shadow maker under me 2
Crying a River of Pain 5
Cause and effect 2
regretful sorrow 2nd 2
Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
regretful sorrow 6
the chambers of insecurity 4
I'm to blame for this 2
Into the Universe 2
Memories of contentment 2
Meticulous Imperfection 3
Storms a brewing 5
My mental turmoil my madness 3
Sands of Time 3
Narcissus 3
Steed of Steel 2
Cranium 6
Life is Poetry 4
Looking Glass 3
Broken Wings 3
Lost 2
Echo's threw my mind 1
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Rest 1
Lost in the Mind 2
Love Lost 1
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Jalapeno Sub 3
No regrets 4
Stair master 1
Lonely for your touch 2
Rain on the Roof 2
Life’s small struggles 3
Auto Pilot 2