Drive By

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  • Going To Be A Song
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    Poem Commentary

    Put this poem up several times and tore it down... He dont like my poems.... But i Do

    Drive By

    Drive By

    It’s okay it doesn’t matter

    I know your they’re

    Invisible mode

    Computer Junkey

    You’re a

    Calculative

    Scheming monkey

    Push my buttons

    Mr. Funky

    You know I know

    You’re invisible to me

    It’s okay it doesn’t matter

    Transparency from your candidness

    Gives you ground

    For pushing buttons

    Playing games

    It’s okay it doesn’t matter

    Complications brings me down

    I go round an round

    Your little town

    Instincts make me drive Bye

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    knight4696 commented on Drive By

    06-08-2010

    Blue - This is quite humorous ... lol! :) I smiled all the way thru .. great word choices and the flow is excellent! Nice Job! :) Ken
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    bluskyinthenite

    06/10/2010

    thanks Ken... out of all my poems I think I like this one the best... Amost want to sing a long Ha

    WordSlinger commented on Drive By

    05-29-2010

    lol, I cant even tell you in how I can relate to this, lol, love it, ty WS
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/29/2010

    so glad i made you laugh . I enjoy to make people laugh .. have a good one on me

    SuSpence commented on Drive By

    05-27-2010

    This was to me both profound and humourous at times, a difficult combinations. I am glad to see you want to make this a song, I sensed a very lyrical quality while reading. Wonderful write blusky. ~Spence
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/27/2010

    thank you very much.

    GUSTY commented on Drive By

    05-26-2010

    I'VE NEVER THOUGHT OF A BETTER WAY OF FORGETTING A CHEAT. I HATE CHEATS ! I LIKE YOUR WORK !!!
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/27/2010

    Thank you so much fpr reading my work.. thanks

    Teardrops commented on Drive By

    05-24-2010

    When i write love poems i look at love in all different ways and this one stops even me . Loved it wish i had thought of it . Marie
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/24/2010

    Hey thank you very much... You have to drive by your loved one house and sit think and drive off with out even saying Hello.. drive bye. ... For a write like this to come to U. Thank you so so much for reading my Poem... I love poetry more so with each passing day. He confuses me so

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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