Nebie know more

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I thank you very much for reading my lines.. and commiting .. lots of hugs and kisses at you.

Nebie know more

It's been a Year now
Since i've flowed the ink
Not a newbie know more
Poetry Pro by far for sure
fourty something poems
Came to mind
Some blind crazy
clearheaded confused
Dizzy befuddled
precision is messy
disorder and untidy

Poetry

alliteration hard to find
not rhyming what soever
But thats me
meticulous imperfection
confused I am

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knight4696 commented on Nebie know more

06-13-2010

Blue - Nice write my friend! My favorite lines are; " alliteration hard to find - not rhyming what soever - But thats me - meticulous imperfection - confused I am" Had to laugh .. Sorry, but I can so relate. :) Great job! :) Ken

lorenzo commented on Nebie know more

06-11-2010

your poems are wonderful, creative and original..............

bluskyinthenite

06/11/2010

thank you so much for taking the time to read my poems. Thanks have a wonderful night

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Enthusiasm Fading 4
Sorry is a empty word 6
Invisible 5
Break 2
Take Flight 4
Searching for my mojo 1
Nature 8
Imagine 2
Nodin's blowing 2
Sons Poem 3
Son's Poem 3
Mobile Cell phone 2
Rock me baby 5
Nebie know more 4
"this trash barrel is still on fire" 4
Total Eclipse 5
Earth's satellite 6
Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
You Don't know Me 9
Drive By 9
re: son's poem 3
RE: sons poems 1
Evolution Distruction 3
Nova 2
Twinkle In His Eye's 2
Put on hold 3
Shadow maker under me 2
Crying a River of Pain 5
Cause and effect 2
regretful sorrow 2nd 2
Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
regretful sorrow 6
the chambers of insecurity 4
I'm to blame for this 2
Into the Universe 2
Memories of contentment 2
Meticulous Imperfection 3
Storms a brewing 5
My mental turmoil my madness 3
Sands of Time 3
Narcissus 3
Steed of Steel 2
Cranium 6
Life is Poetry 4
Looking Glass 3
Broken Wings 3
Lost 2
Echo's threw my mind 1
Lazy cold cold day and here ai " Sitting here looking like this!" 1
Rest 1
Lost in the Mind 2
Love Lost 1
Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain" 2
Jalapeno Sub 3
No regrets 4
Stair master 1
Lonely for your touch 2
Rain on the Roof 2
Life’s small struggles 3
Auto Pilot 2