Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

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    Working on this one, finding it hard to make it flow and orginize my thoughts. I'm Mad Mad i say. Not!

    Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

    Stonewalling is the ultimate defense
    Stone fox I am.
    Got burned,
    Crushed, heart broken
    Several years behind me now.

    Countless days spent insane in the brain.
    Wasted years gone by
    Nights days full of emptiness
    Devoid of laughter, sunshine,
    Unoccupied it said
    I locked myself away
    Insane in the brain

    Unable to find my way out of my misery
    Of madness
    I was in a maze
    stuck on a love
    That was never meant to be
    I couldnt see
    Adift in the mind

    Insane in the brain

    Couldnt tell when my lucidness returned

    Indeed was I ever sane at all…….

    Hidden away

    Insane in the brain.

    I thank you for breaking my heart
    That one summer’s day.

    If it were not for that day
    I wouldn’t strive to be the     person
    I want to be this day.
    My mind goes blank with strong expressions of silence
    Still insane in the brain.

     

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    earthly commented on Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

    06-08-2010

    Aren't we all at times-a little insane in the brain that is-LOL-memorable read-Namaste...Earthly
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    StandingBear commented on Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain"

    06-08-2010

    A great self purging work you share. Deep thoughts rise to the surface. Great write!
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