Storms a brewing

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    Storms a brewing

    I can hear the thunder coming

    Its getting closer

    Can't you hear

    I hear a single sharp crash of thunder

    Accompanies a stroke of lightning

    Pealing across the sky

    Deep rumbling noise

    High up in the sky

    Reverberations crashing

    Boom booming

    Thunderbolts Pounding across the sky

    Rolling laughter,

    I want it to roar with laughter

    Underneath

    Far below

    Beneath the blueskysinthenight

    I hear rolling bangs of thunder

    Way way down under

    Explosion blast explode

    With loud vociferous

    Thunderclaps

    Commandingly as i dance a merry jig

    Laughing an singing

    To the angry bolt of lightning

    Violently roars

    In front of my yes

    Loud cracking bolt of lightning

    Explosive so so bright to the sight

    As I dance a dance of joy laughing

    Below the thunder in the sky

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    kmooney commented on Storms a brewing

    04-17-2010

    I like to listen to an approaching storm. Hear the thunder and count the beats between the thunder and the lightening. I have similar poem called Daydreaming. Check it out. Liked your poem. Made me smile. I've seen anyone "dance a merry jig" for an approaching storm....interesting....lol. Thanks for sharing....Kevin
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    WordSlinger commented on Storms a brewing

    04-16-2010

    When it storms I love it I sit on the porch, and you discribe it to a T, thank WS
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/17/2010

    thanks thunder storms are my farvorite

    FranzJ commented on Storms a brewing

    04-16-2010

    weeather good or bad is part of live and nature---------
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