Looking Glass

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    Looking Glass

    Looking glass

    See people passing by transitory
    Briefly in my line of     view
    wondering why she got a boob job
    Why this one got a     tummy tuck
    6Gs Spent on vanity excessive pride.
    Vanity takes a hold of     that country girl.
    As she struts across the parking lot cam on keeping in time.
    Would I could I plump my bosoms
    Tuck this tuck that
    As I strut across the parking lot
    Breast just a bouncing with each stride
    With the rhythm of the pride
    If I had the money
    12g is all it takes to transform
    My little physique     Transformed into,
    Barbie 101
    Excessive Pride

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    devaamido commented on Looking Glass

    04-12-2010

    Funny.........................................................!!!
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/12/2010

    glad you liked. Double D here they come. Just kidding

    knight4696 commented on Looking Glass

    04-10-2010

    This one made me laugh Blue! :) It's so true though .. Society certainly has a way with jammin this kinda shit down our throats. Women worry about their Boob size, firm butts and tight tummies etc .. meanwhile us guys get products pushed on us like ..Viagra, Extenze and Ciallis - then of course we have to pump iron and get 6 pack abs! - Vanity is shallow and it takes time to appreciate inner beauty. We focus too much on the shell - I'm laughing at myself as I have been on the Atkins diet for a couple months - shedding my winter layer and getting ready for the beach. lol! Great write again my friend! :) Ken
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/10/2010

    Thans..........Yes with age the body seem to fall. I workout and try my hardest to say in shape. Let me tell you some days!.

    FreeBird02 commented on Looking Glass

    04-07-2010

    That is actually pretty cute. A strong subtle reminder that no one honestly knows no one these days. What is real, what was tucked, what silicone gives them their current looks. lol FreeBird 02
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/07/2010

    Yeah I just gazed out the workplace window. For a small town there are plenty of women that get this tucked that pulled them Enhanced. I thought ohh if i only had money could i go for a Double D . Just getting into things that goes threw my mind is all. So glad i made you chuckle tho. That made my day. Thank U for reading

    FreeBird02

    04/07/2010

    I too have always had a dream of Double Ds, but the higher the cups the lower the truly passionate heart. Go figure. lol FreeBird 02

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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