the chambers of insecurity

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    the chambers of insecurity

    I’m sorry I have no words to share

    As I sit here and stare

    Vacant and Insecure

    I try hard to unburden

    Unwind

    Define my hair hanging low

    Releasing positive vibrations

    Are hard to grasps

    This energy flow

    Atmosphere of nervousness

    Is what I got

    Oscillation

    In my membrane

    Over powers

    Leaves me bare

    Empty and void

    Shaking to the core

    Chambers of insecurity 

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    knight4696 commented on the chambers of insecurity

    05-07-2010

    Blue - This is going straight to my faves! :) You reach so deep in this one. I truly enjoyed! :) Ken
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/08/2010

    Thanks Ken.. that mean alot.. Glad i made you smile

    ApaqRasgirl commented on the chambers of insecurity

    05-06-2010

    terrific piece, very powerful the way you described your feeling, you did great for not having words to share. thanks for sharing love Asha
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    thecross commented on the chambers of insecurity

    05-01-2010

    nice depth in this piece with a good flow nicely done.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/02/2010

    thank you very much.

    Rhymer commented on the chambers of insecurity

    05-01-2010

    Very descriptive write, enjoyed the read 10 from me,.................
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