Take Flight

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    Another poem i found on my computer that i wrote awhile ago..Shortly after i got bad commits on a poem... i wrote this one

    Take Flight

    You Don't know me

    All you see is my avatar

    My Motorcycle four wheeler

    I write about  confusion

    of life

    I'm not passing judgment on

    Anyone

    Judgment is for the Lord God

    I spew my thoughts

    In hopes of touching someones soul

    If you don't like please

    take a flight

    May it be a wonderful flight

    You don't have to flow

    the ink

    Of negativity

    It isn't about you

    They're my thoughts

     

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Take Flight

    08-30-2010

    I totally agree! Continue to write... not for the approval of others but for your own therapy. That's what the art of writing is all about.
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    knight4696 commented on Take Flight

    08-21-2010

    YES BLUE!!! YOU GO GIRL!!! :) I so agree with your every word! :) Touche' ... Keep up the great work my friend! :) Ken
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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Take Flight

    08-20-2010

    amen to that one dear...........you just spoke for the majority of us.......you said it so well......loved it......thanks love asha
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    dahlusion commented on Take Flight

    08-20-2010

    Beautifully crafted! I am all for freedom of speech, and you have spoken your truth. bravo!! peace and light, dah
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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