My mental turmoil my madness

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    My mental turmoil my madness " I was called a distraction" 　

    My mental turmoil my madness

    You called me a distraction
    I'm your mental turmoil of madness
    Your entertainment your interruption of lifes turmoil
    I was happy to provoke pleasing interest 
    Distractions from your worries and vexations,
    Countless days spent together intertwinded in each others pleasures,
    I was pleased to be your entertainment,
    If only for a short time,
    I grow confused myself,
    Thoughts of Being a distraction has turned itself around,
    In my obsession to touch your heart,
    I conjured my magic and put a spell on you,
     Now i find myself confused,
    You are now my distraction,
    My mental turmoil my madness

    　

    　

    　

    　

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    devaamido commented on My mental turmoil my madness

    04-19-2010

    Ya wanna watch what you wish for... You might get it!
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    kmooney commented on My mental turmoil my madness

    04-17-2010

    Hmmmm....sounds like scorned love. I usually keep my distance with these types of affairs. Nice collection of thoughts. Sounds like I would rather be on your good side....Thanks again for sharing. Kevin
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    GUSTY commented on My mental turmoil my madness

    04-15-2010

    IT EXCITES ME TO READ ABOUT ALL THAT CONCERNS THE BRAIN. ITS EXCITNG STILL TO KNOW THAT THE ABNORMAL BRAIN MAKES AN ABNORMAL MAN!!! YOU'VE EXPLAINED IT ALL,I LIKE THAT.
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    bluskyinthenite

    04/15/2010

    so very glad you enjoyed my write. Thank you very much for reading.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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