Shards of ice pierce my heart

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Shards of ice pierce my heart



I see the contempt in your eyes
They’re dark
~obscure~
~leaden~
Why do you want
~To do me like that~
Pretentious Soul
Are you lost
I never laid eyes on you before
I’m dreaming
A night mare
Of utter disgust
~Condescension~
Penetrates the night
Impact hits hard
My wings unfold
I take flight into the night
Soaring high into the starry sky

I awake to the sound of birds
Singing a flawless song
Giving Praise to a glorious
New Day
It was only
A nightmare
Thank God

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knight4696 commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

05-07-2010

Blue - I love your style ... you have such a unique way of conveying your thoughts ,, A fresh and creative write! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

05/07/2010

Ken thank you very much... Very much appreciated....... shanks

Rhymer commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

05-05-2010

Always good to wake up and find out it was only a dream. 10 from me.

bluskyinthenite

05/05/2010

thank you Rhymer. much appreciated

SuSpence commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

05-03-2010

Haha, lovely write, I have had nightmares like this before. And I have certainly gotten that cold piercing look a few times in my day. Great expression, loved it. -Spence

bluskyinthenite

05/03/2010

thank you for reading.. much appreciated I'm telling you

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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