Shards of ice pierce my heart

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    Shards of ice pierce my heart



    I see the contempt in your eyes
    They’re dark
    ~obscure~
    ~leaden~
    Why do you want
    ~To do me like that~
    Pretentious Soul
    Are you lost
    I never laid eyes on you before
    I’m dreaming
    A night mare
    Of utter disgust
    ~Condescension~
    Penetrates the night
    Impact hits hard
    My wings unfold
    I take flight into the night
    Soaring high into the starry sky

    I awake to the sound of birds
    Singing a flawless song
    Giving Praise to a glorious
    New Day
    It was only
    A nightmare
    Thank God

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    knight4696 commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

    05-07-2010

    Blue - I love your style ... you have such a unique way of conveying your thoughts ,, A fresh and creative write! :) Ken
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/07/2010

    Ken thank you very much... Very much appreciated....... shanks

    Rhymer commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

    05-05-2010

    Always good to wake up and find out it was only a dream. 10 from me.
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/05/2010

    thank you Rhymer. much appreciated

    SuSpence commented on Shards of ice pierce my heart

    05-03-2010

    Haha, lovely write, I have had nightmares like this before. And I have certainly gotten that cold piercing look a few times in my day. Great expression, loved it. -Spence
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    bluskyinthenite

    05/03/2010

    thank you for reading.. much appreciated I'm telling you

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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