regretful sorrow

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regretful sorrow

Social butterfly
I am not
Words don’t come easy
They’re difficult to grasp
~Awkward~
Self consciousness
Especially in social situations
I some times wonder
What made me Elusive
Void of verses
~Empty~
What a curse
~Anxiety~
~Worry~
~Fear~
Bungle of sounds
Escape my lips
Hesitation
I should have
Big sigh
Regretful sorrow

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mustascheman commented on regretful sorrow

05-03-2010

This is a great expression of a personal feeling that a lot of people have. Well done.

bluskyinthenite

05/07/2010

thanks for checking me out

Dano commented on regretful sorrow

05-01-2010

i often have trouble in social settings as well so this was very relatable for me... your expression is fantastic... nicely written

bluskyinthenite

05/02/2010

thank you very much

WordSlinger commented on regretful sorrow

05-01-2010

like this, sometimes we dont have the words to say, and things get to far away, ty WS

bluskyinthenite

05/02/2010

thanks for reading my poem.... I think i'm getting the hang of it. I like to write. Thanks

bluskyinthenite

05/03/2010

thank you very much for reading. I've noticed words people say and want to use them in my Poems. I love poetry more with each passing day.

SuSpence commented on regretful sorrow

05-01-2010

Wonderful write, profiling social awkwardness haha, I loved it! I especially loved the use of the word 'Bungle', Love that word, not used often enough lol, Jolly good show Blusky. -Spence

bluskyinthenite

05/01/2010

Ohhh Starry Night.. thousand thanks...... much apprecitated

xdavidabramx commented on regretful sorrow

05-01-2010

i love this poem. i've definitely felt like this before; it's something a lot of people can connect to on some level. definitely a 10.

bluskyinthenite

05/01/2010

oh thank you so very very much .. Makes me warm and happy that ya'll enjoy my poems

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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