Lost in the Mind

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    Lost in the Mind

    Compulsive thinker I am.

    My mind cry out for laughter

    and sunshine

    moonbeams dance on the tips of my wings.
    Confusing faces N Shifting places.

    I'm lost and can not see

    Lost N the Mind of the Midnight blue

    Sailing free In the Cold dark Sea.

    I'm lost and can not C.

     

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    dahlusion commented on Lost in the Mind

    04-08-2010

    "moonbeams dance on the tips of my wings" — love the imagery from this line, and I do not believe that you are lost. You are your own light: shine on!!

    bluskyinthenite

    04/08/2010

    Ohh Thanks. Some times i feel so lost though. I'm lost in a man and i can not see. He blurs my vision, and i get lost in the midnight sea. Cold, blind and wonder some times.............

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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