Lonely for your touch

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    Lonely for your touch
    Lonely for your touch

    Lonely for your touch. I want to withdraw inside my mind hide away from the prowl of your detached distant touch. Time and space between us at times are unbearable. Am I immersing myself in feelings of self neglect? Abiding in such states of clarity that make me want to cry a river of empty sadness. Hide deep inside my mind feel no pain my soul Lost forever in time gone beyond the moments of now.
    Is Elation waiting for me each waking moment of the days of my life? No human quality is beyond change do I fall off into the abyss of life’s lonely hearts?
    Analyzing a kiss only makes it meaningless. Open your heart I’m knocking ever so gently. Would you not open your heart let me in I’m lonely for your touch. Life is so short but we as a couple can make life much sweeter.

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    dahlusion commented on Lonely for your touch

    04-05-2010

    "Analyzing a kiss only makes it meaningless' — WOW...to this line of poetic brilliance. You passion is a weeping wound of deep poetic sadness and beauty. Bravo!!
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    kalel commented on Lonely for your touch

    03-26-2010

    This one speaks to me on a very personal level this week, thank you for posting it.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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