Eyes Of Hazel One

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Sadly this wonderful place seems to have lost it's way. I have met many amazing people here, and don't regret a single moment I have spent roaming the Op halls. If this is the end, I will be here until the door closes behind me and they have to shove me out. But if this is to be, I will be forever greatful, for I have found my one true love in this lil nook within the world wide web. And I will never forget that, or the people who welcomed me to this community. Thank you all, and I plan to try and keep writing, despite what happens here. For poets do not write to be rated and/or praised. They write to express themselves, and you do not need a web page to accomplish this. I hope you enjoy this write. ~Spence

Eyes Of Hazel One


Long ago, 

A necromancer summoned the dead, and did forsee,
the shadow of an angel watching over me
'Your mirrored souls reflection will be cast,
in the meadow of your dreams clear brook of glass'
'She is to be, your sugar in the plum,
she is to be your eyes of hazel one'

Time seemed to pass the window like a rolling fog,
years of condensation grew upon the sod
Wading through anticipation to my knees,
seeking a cure to my deficiency disease
Then one day, like a spark decending from the sun,
rained down upon me, my eyes of hazel one

Love sometimes appears as if coincidence,
it draws back the curtains upon your 'truest' friends
The truth in thier intentions will be shown,
when the misery of your lonesome days have flown
For those of you who have chosen me to shun,
goodbye, for I've found my eyes of hazel one

Now, my happy ending stretches across the road ahead,
songs of beetles reverberating, vibrating within my head
Something in the way, she looks at me,
brings me closer to the man I longed to be
I'm on the right path even though my direction spun,
so long, I'm with my eyes of hazel one

The tides of change brought waves of joy,
and peace to this former whipping boy
Breaking the pasts surface, I transcend,
with my new found bestest friend
Sweet, as a smothered, southern sticky bun,
I love you, my darling eyes of hazel one





 

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Narrator commented on Eyes Of Hazel One

02-15-2013

Crafted with skill, a joy to read, I was enchanted. You are both lucky lucky people! A true delight, thank you, you are a balm to the soul.

Insideme commented on Eyes Of Hazel One

03-01-2011

That was really something special to read, it made me feel and that my friend is what good poetry does!

aysha commented on Eyes Of Hazel One

02-26-2011

This is a beautiful poem.. This poem can win any contest. Very descriptive, emotional, imaginative. You are gifted!!!!!

SuSpence

06/06/2011

Thanks aysha :) Sorry I took so long in replying, I don't get online much these days. Peace and Love, Spence

spbsdude commented on Eyes Of Hazel One

02-23-2011

This is so beautiful that I had to share it with a friend of mine who writes poetry and has already seen it apparently as her comment is below. It reminded me of our friendship. Simply wonderful!

carynontherhine commented on Eyes Of Hazel One

02-23-2011

This is absolutely beautiful and spellbinding. Just as you both are as a couple. Much love to you both. Hugz

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

SuSpence’s Poems (53)

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Eyes Of Hazel One 6
Each New Day 16
The Tomorrow Dream 43
What See You 19
Nirvana (Haiku) 13
Sonnet 3 21
The Poetry Of Time 33
Mirrored Souls 33
My Open Broken Heart 20
Passing Thoughts 16
Sonnet 1 19
Ode To My Love 17
Angel With Butterfly Wings 20
Procrastinati
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16
A Conversation in Appreciation 13
Miranda's Song 14
The Sarasota Blues 27
Highku 22
Tripping Stream of Consciousness 35
Along The River's Breath 51
Sometimes... 37
Transport 34
Love Never Knows 39
SuSpence's Dream 33
Ode to the Beatles (acrostic challenge) 18
The Generation Who Sold The World 30
Christine 24
Glenn Beck (Haiku) Compilation 32
The Tragic Tale of Alejandro Vega 56
Ballad of the Lost Man 32
Gulf of Fire (Haiku) 34
Fade to White 34
Ugly World 53
Searchin' for Love 26
Lost am I 28
Shards of Me 27
The Sadness, 10
The New Moon 18
I Imagine, 13
Lovesick, Lonesome Blues 11
SIX FOOT 11
Beautiful Poet 10
The Morning Sun 5
A Question for Love 13
Realm of Delusion 26
Simply Thoughts of You 9
Caught Staring 6
The Edge of the Headlands 3
In My Mind... 15
Thoughts of Natalia 14
A New Path 10
Daydream 12
Gone is my Sunshine 17