In My Mind...

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    In My Mind...

    In my mind, I can go anywhere,

    Adrift on the ocean, could I be the sail?

    I could be the brush which runs through your hair,

    Not limited by reality measured by no scale

     
    I can fly to the moon disappear in the sea,

    I could be the bright light shone out from the marquee

    I could be a swallow soaring with such grace,

    I can be the warmth when you long for an embrace

     
    In my mind possibilities are limitless

    Traveling through space and time,

    Each moment with you can seem so endless,

    Your lips taste of lavender wine

     
    You smile shines like a thousand suns,

    The sharpness of your wit is second to none

    Together we laugh and roll along the floor,

    Beginning to melt we seep through the boards

     
    In my mind thoughts flow like a river,

    Not knowing how or where it will end

    I could descend over the falls holding on by a sliver,

    Or wash up along the sea bed

     
    I can recall the most distant of memories,

    Remembering however I please

    Like the look on your face a moment before,

    Your body explodes with a sneeze

     
    All journeys must end for a new one to begin,

    This knowledge in time you will know

    Next time you see me you can tell me how you’ve been,

    But for now I really must go

     
    Until the next time I drift off to sleep,

    Together again we will be

    Join me once more and you will find,

    In your mind there is no admission fee

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    mdpoetgirl commented on In My Mind...

    06-26-2010

    Great piece on the power of imagination.. thanks for sharing ;-)

    Chaos128 commented on In My Mind...

    12-16-2009

    In the kingdom of his own mind, every man's a king, and it's entirely up to him what kind of country he rules.

    optimistic commented on In My Mind...

    07-03-2009

    A poets hands using just this to potray his work for the love of another is deep. your ryhme in this poem is beautiful.

    kmeadows commented on In My Mind...

    06-22-2009

    Another beautiful piece, well written, and so very enjoyable. I dont know where you get your inspiration, but keep it going!

    MsKrystle commented on In My Mind...

    06-15-2009

    I like this poem, I really like the last line "in your mind there is no admission fee" I daydream all the time. Especially when Im somwhere I dont want to be. Nice work

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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