Miranda's Song

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    Miranda's Song

    This is a Lyrical re-write of Toto's Rosanna Haha, It is for a friend, for her birthday present. I hope you enjoy it. Happy Birthday!


    You arose early this morning with a new gleam in your eyes
    Miranda, Miranda
    Your reflection speaks, 'Tis not a one more Beautiful or Amazing than thee', Miranda (tis true)
    Neil Diamond's 'Girl You'll Be A Woman Soon' is stuck in your mind (Lol)
    Miranda, Miranda
    If I were a thief i'd steal all your pain so you could be free

    Chorus:
    Some may say this song is cheesy or cliche, Miranda yeah
    But I know deep down inside you'll love it anyway
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah

    I hope you forgot I told you 'bout this song so it'll be a surprise (haha)
    Miranda, Miranda
    This day I pray you receive everything you deserve or it'll make me sad, Miranda

    As you lean in to make your wish the candlelight swims in your eyes
    Miranda, Miranda
    I know you don't want much, but i'd lasso you the moon if it'd make you glad

    My wish'd be this evening I could attend your Soiree, Miranda yeah
    So in person my words I could truly convey
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah

    (Instrumental Break)

    Some may say this song is cheesy or cliche, Miranda yeah
    But I know deep down inside you'll love it anyway
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah

    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Miranda yeah
    Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday, Love ya yeah

    Happy Birthday ((((Maranda))))

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    stefy commented on Miranda's Song

    07-16-2010

    Miranda should be very happy for your very amusing gift:)
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    ginga commented on Miranda's Song

    07-14-2010

    Miranda must be a precious soul to be deserving of such melodic fun and frolic. A true gift. ginga
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    Chaos128 commented on Miranda's Song

    07-12-2010

    Your version does a whole lot more than hold its own, Spence (Glad to see the bassist took care of that string) : )
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    SuSpence

    07/13/2010

    Hahaha thanks Chaos, i hate re-stringing guitars! I am glad you think this holds its own, I mean I would never want to step on the toes of the immortal rock Gods we all know by the name Toto Lol. Actually I do like that song, and I was nervous about this one for awhile, but she liked it so its aaall good, Peace out brother, ~Spence

    SavVySam commented on Miranda's Song

    07-12-2010

    How wonderful!!! I know she must be absolutely thrilled to have you pen a song in honor in celebration of her special day! You did an excellent job with this song too..enjoyed the musical flashback! Most awesome!;)
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    SuSpence

    07/13/2010

    Awww thanks so much Sam :) She was pretty happy with it, I was nervous about her liking it, but Success! I am glad you liked it too, thank you for your kind words :) You are so kind, I just may have to Rework the Beatles song and pen 'Savvy Sam' to the tune of 'Sexy Sadie' lol, I think it would fit with some lyrical tweaks haha. Peace and Love, Spence

    SavVySam

    07/13/2010

    lolol!!;) Have a good one my friend!

    Maleficent commented on Miranda's Song

    07-12-2010

    a delightful birthday melody... I know this will be stuck in her head now! ;)
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    SuSpence

    07/13/2010

    Thanks Mal! :) It has been stuck in my head for weeks haha, writing it, then waiting for her birthday, and now that I know she likes it, it may never get out of my head Lol. Peace and Love, Spence

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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