Nirvana (Haiku)

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You looked so beautiful that day, it truly was nirvana. 143 :)

Nirvana (Haiku)



A lovely flower
thai upon the eve of dusk 
your beautiful face

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TinaD commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

01-25-2011

This haiku really conveys great love for the person for whom it was written. Well done.

thecross commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

12-12-2010

you used alluring words that captivated the reader in my opinion and described your subject perfectly you managed to relay your feelings without making it common (haiku wise) or sappy I appreciate this write.

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

11-22-2010

I love this one. The beautiful picture and the beautiful words went hand in hand. Well done.........E

Madelynn commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

11-20-2010

Yes Spence she is! So beautiful- and you completely complimented her lovliness even more with this perfect lil' diddy- tricky these haikus- unless you can really understand the beauty and emotion it takes to write one- and Spence, you do.-peace, hugz-Maddi

Dano commented on Nirvana (Haiku)

11-17-2010

as far as poetry goes you nailed it... as far as huiku goes you nailed it... nicely written

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

SuSpence’s Poems (53)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Eyes Of Hazel One 6
Each New Day 16
The Tomorrow Dream 43
What See You 19
Nirvana (Haiku) 13
Sonnet 3 21
The Poetry Of Time 33
Mirrored Souls 33
My Open Broken Heart 20
Passing Thoughts 16
Sonnet 1 19
Ode To My Love 17
Angel With Butterfly Wings 20
Procrastinati
on
16
A Conversation in Appreciation 13
Miranda's Song 14
The Sarasota Blues 27
Highku 22
Tripping Stream of Consciousness 35
Along The River's Breath 51
Sometimes... 37
Transport 34
Love Never Knows 39
SuSpence's Dream 33
Ode to the Beatles (acrostic challenge) 18
The Generation Who Sold The World 30
Christine 24
Glenn Beck (Haiku) Compilation 32
The Tragic Tale of Alejandro Vega 56
Ballad of the Lost Man 32
Gulf of Fire (Haiku) 34
Fade to White 34
Ugly World 53
Searchin' for Love 26
Lost am I 28
Shards of Me 27
The Sadness, 10
The New Moon 18
I Imagine, 13
Lovesick, Lonesome Blues 11
SIX FOOT 11
Beautiful Poet 10
The Morning Sun 5
A Question for Love 13
Realm of Delusion 26
Simply Thoughts of You 9
Caught Staring 6
The Edge of the Headlands 3
In My Mind... 15
Thoughts of Natalia 14
A New Path 10
Daydream 12
Gone is my Sunshine 17