A Redo

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A Redo

It's not fair, how could you , how you dare.
I try, and I try to make it work.
You can't even compare.
I'm still here and it's not clear.
I love you, you know this is true.
But for you to say you love me too, and keep
doing the things you do.

Just be true, through and through.
I was a fool to fall so madly in love with you.
I was blinded, and couldn't see, that all I've been,
was a toy, something to do.

I have been hurt before, so I explained my point of
view. Never the less you kept up with the pursue.
I didn't know I was just a game.
I should have been smart and withdrew.
I wish I could change it all now with a REDO.

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EyesOfRain commented on A Redo

08-28-2012

A sentiment I know so well! Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece.

sandyb

08/28/2012

No, thank you for reading.

freemansvoice commented on A Redo

12-17-2010

If we could turn back time, would any of us even be here

kdarcy commented on A Redo

12-13-2010

I love it, how sad but true- some go through all of their lives playing games. I prefer not, real carries enough pain of its own when things don't work out whatever the reason. I'm working on one entitled " Do Over ", go figure ... our lives are not so different, we all live what is dealt us, be well my friend k

sandyb

12/13/2010

Thanks for the comment. That is so very true.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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Just Another Day 9
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These Questions 1
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Treasured Beauty 1
Only In My Dreams 4
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