Dark Pit

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Dark Pit

I have reached the Dark Pit within.

I am full of regret, 

should of let go of everything I held in.

 

I did not realize how low I could get.

These emotions, 

I wish I never met.

 

I'm hurting those around me,

and for that I am sorry.

I do not deserve the love you give.

I am not worthy.

 

I try to hide these tears I cry;

when you ask I tell a lie.

In my frustration lives an agonizing 

desperation,

alone I can not rectify.

You pry as to why I deny,

what my eyes cannot falsify.

 

Confused and depressed

I have led others to be stressed.

Had I been able to address

my worries and concerns

instead of having them suppressed.

None of these fears would have had

a chance to manifest.

 

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Lolee commented on Dark Pit

09-20-2009

Written very nicely...for a very sad subject. I think life is the hardest no mom. Good poem...the reader knows what your problem is and what you think about it. Knowing is half the battle.

Lolee

09/20/2009

pardon my misnomer. I meant "the hardest ON mom." lol

deathgoth01 commented on Dark Pit

09-01-2009

You can ryme and make sence at the same time! GREAT! I wish i could do it!

SILKYTWEED commented on Dark Pit

06-24-2009

Nice Flow....again, in this beautifully written piece...I can definitely relate to that most hated and feared dark pit....

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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