Devine Loss

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Devine Loss

Devine Loss
I ignored the danger sign. 
Believed I would be fine.
Thought I was on cloud nine.
Sitting on the sideline,
I watched and waited for you to be mine.
I was there for you rain or shine.
All the while there I was, unaware that I 
Had became your joke. 
That explains why you started to 
push and poke.
I should of drew the line, but somehow I continued
to let you undermine my love that could of
been so Devine.
To have lost my love is a crime.
You will regret this Loss over time.

I ignored the danger sign. 
Believed I would be fine.
Thought I was on cloud nine.

Sitting on the sideline,
I watched and waited for you to be mine.
I was there for you rain or shine.

All the while there I was, unaware that I 
Had became your joke. 
That explains why you started to 
push and poke.

I should of drew the line, but somehow I continued
to let you undermine my love that could of
been so Devine.

To have lost my love is a crime.
You will regret this Loss over time.

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lithiumblack commented on Devine Loss

08-30-2009

I don't feel that I have the words to treat this poem with the respect it, and its' writer deserves, but it's an easy 10.

CMarsh commented on Devine Loss

08-30-2009

Sad but true, when we thing there are better things in our future sometimes the best has already be found but like most men they continue to search like the hound they are...I would like to exclude myself from the hound comparison..lol hence the word most,not all.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Only When I'm Alone 2
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Like Me 1
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Just Another Day 9
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Let It Go 2
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These Questions 1
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WHAT'S LEFT OF ME 2
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Devine Loss 2
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DAUGHTER 1
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My Office 2
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Your Special Love 0
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You Treat Me 2
Your Memory 1
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Now You Need Me 1
LOVE HATE GAME 2
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Love's Freedom 1
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