Out of the Blue

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Out of the Blue

What would you do, if out the blue,
I told you I no longer love you?

I gave you my best, but now I've put 
that to rest and I'm through. I didn't mean
to misconstrue every time you said," I Love You."

It's time to undo what has been long overdue. 
Maybe someday you'll understand my point of view.

Although I rue the fact that I ever even loved you,
I would like to say,"Thank You". Without all that I
went through, I wouldn't know what is fake or what 
is true. 

I'll find someone new, someone better than
you. He'll treat me right and do all the
little things you didn't know how to.

I do not care what you would do. 

I told you one day, out of the blue I'm 
going to leave you.

Thought you knew.





 

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kdarcy commented on Out of the Blue

07-20-2010

Most often people know when the end is coming, its hard for some to let go of less than perfect, because at least it predictable, no sense prolonging a wasted effort of at least the one who knows its over. Nice flow to lines, good choice of words, I liked that, couldn't you tell, be well

lithiumblack commented on Out of the Blue

05-25-2010

You can't get more direct and honest. I understand this is deeply personal for you, Sandy, but if you'll allow me, I'd like to focus on the poem itself. Strangely enough, I can hear this accompanied with music...this piece would make a powerful song, but everything you write has such an enigmatic, lyrical quality to it...I wonder if perhaps you've a private concert running in your head when you're writing? As for the content. Sandy, I don't know if there are ever any comforting or profound words to be said to you, but I will say that you should never doubt yourself. No matter the poison spewed at you throughout your worst experiences, just remember that you're still here and you're still breathing and only you can decide the outcome of your own evolution...but, you've a mighty pen and mammoth skill with which to wield it, and I have no doubt that you'll triumph in the end.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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