Silent Romance

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Silent Romance

Heart so tender, your presence is such sweet
splendor. To you my spirit could surrender.
Wishing my time would have been sooner.
Given this moment, how could I not pursue.
I waited too long, just to talk to you. 
Sorrowful I might be, there's not much I
could do. Conceal my excitement, stay out of
view. 
This urge is setting me in a whirlwind
motion. Remind myself to proceed with 
caution. This doesn't happen to me very 
often. In my heart you will not be 
forgotten. 
I have never met another with 
such a charming personality, what you speak,
your words are felt with sincerity. In your
eyes I feel the intensity. How I wish to 
feel your warm embrace, go with you 
anyplace. I will not hope for chance, this
is my own silent romance.

Heart so tender, your presence is such sweet
splendor. To you my spirit could surrender.
Wishing my time would have been sooner.

Given this moment, how could I not pursue.
I waited too long, just to talk to you. 
Sorrowful I might be, there's not much I
could do. Conceal my excitement, stay out of
view. 

This urge is setting me in a whirlwind
motion. Remind myself to proceed with 
caution. This doesn't happen to me very 
often. In my heart you will not be 
forgotten. 

I have never met another with 
such a charming personality, what you speak,
your words are felt with sincerity. In your
eyes I feel the intensity. How I wish to 
feel your warm embrace, go with you 
anyplace. I will not hope for chance, this
is my own silent romance.

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drkoolc commented on Silent Romance

08-31-2009

the words are great, I would change waited to wait and felt to a present tense word though.

LDSforlife commented on Silent Romance

08-27-2009

The content is touching but I am not thrilled by the presentation. It's okay but just doesn't grab me as "great".

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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