Boundaries

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    Boundaries

    There are many things that keep up from doing things and being things that we are and should be.
    If we are tall we want to be short, if we are big we want to be little,
    if we are smart we sometimes play dumb to fit in with our surroundings.
    Everything has a boundary, love, earth, people, and places.
    What about those who want to be loved so desperately and cant because of obstacles that block their way.
    And they say love crosses all boundaries....
    If this is true, where is the fairness in having someone you can't touch or feel or hold at night,
    My life defines me, but it shouldn't define who I love.
    Somethings I guess will never change.

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    Richisfun commented on Boundaries

    10-11-2010

    So they say love crosses all boundaries ! Huh, lets have more love and less boundaries, and lets become what we want to be. your poem taught me that.

    PRober commented on Boundaries

    07-18-2009

    very astutely observent indeed! You can never change what or who you are made to be... and sometimes having what you think you want, is merely an illusion. Great job, write on!

    Grito commented on Boundaries

    07-10-2009

    Life and its possibilities are limited only by our imagination, boundaries are self imposed, the decision is ours to make.

    Mypenurpaper commented on Boundaries

    07-10-2009

    It's sad but so true. I enjoyed reading this. The feeling of truth through out this is very inspiring.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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