The Fallen Angel

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    The Fallen Angel

    They say angels only exist in heaven, but some have been granted to live amongst us,
    Drying our tears, and being there when we need them the most.
    I have the pleasure of knowing a angel, who happens to be one of my best friends, Although this piece of work does not fall into any poetry form or fashion, it is based on the honest truth.
    If you wonder if angels really do exists, i have the proof.
    I met my fallen angel in a crowded room,
    though he could not see my tears and my scars then, he still cares for me within, this piece of work is an lament to him, and he knows who he is.
    Thank you for wiping my tears, and caring for my wounds, and watching over me through my fears.
    Although he may not believe he is special, i know in my heart, if more people were like him, i wouldn't have to be worlds apart or fear the night.
    I love you my fallen angel, sleep well tonight.

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    Qualin commented on The Fallen Angel

    07-06-2009

    I NOTICED RICHISFUN MADE A COMMENT ABOUT AN ANGEL IF YOU NOTICED HE SAID "HE STAYED AROUND " WHICH MAKES IT MUCH MORE BELEIVABLE BECAUSE THERE ARE NO FEMALE ANGELS WOMAN WAS CREATED FOR MAN...AND GOD SURE KNEW WHAT HE WAS DOING WHEN HE SHOWED THE FINAL PRODUCT ENOUGH THAT HE TURNED HIS BACK ON GOD YOUR VERY CLOSE TO FALLING IN THAT CATAGORY..AND IF THERE WERE FEMALE ANGEL'S THERE I BELEIVE THEY WOULD FAVOR YOU AND YOUR POETRY IS NOT TO BE TAKEN LIGHTLY ...QUALIN

    Richisfun commented on The Fallen Angel

    06-07-2009

    China i really did meet an angel when i was younger andn he stayed around me and my sister for a month and to this day we love him so much, i can tell u about him one day, love your poems and yr honesty,,, You will be one of the Greats one day

    brandon commented on The Fallen Angel

    06-07-2009

    you have sucessfuly brought tears to my eyes and i know what you mean in this i am glad you found your angel

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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