The Rain


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At the first sight and feel of the rain, we all have a overshelming feeling that we are without stain. Doesnt it feel good to be clean. Enjoy the rain and the gift of the earth.

The Rain

As the rain falls outside my window in various shades of grey,
I notice that the world is much cleaner and the doubts and fears are simply gone away.
For just one instant there is no thought of war, pain, or death
Only the beauty of the earth and the tears that dance from mother nature's vest.
As I stand in the curtain of thousands of clear diamond strands, I notice that I am once clean, twice clean,..... clean once again.
My worries are washed away, as well as my tears are unseen,
 I am normal, not dangerous, beautiful, not stained,
I am whole once again...
And its all because of the rain.

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Athena1989 commented on The Rain


love it good i like your pome you are real about it an di love that

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SpiritSong commented on The Rain


Really beautiful quiet moments when it rains can calm and refresh the soul. I really thought it was well written and thoughtful and articulate. Wonderful imagery as well..this was quite nice a classic style...thank you so much for sharing this..wonderful

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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