Who am I

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    Who am I

     I am the seeker of souls,
    the creator of death and the end of life,
    I shall not admire or be admired,
    yet I thirst for understanding.
    I can lead you astray,
    take all of your passions and identity away,
    yet I feel pain, sometimes there are inevitable drains,
    of life, and lost, who am i you say,
    I am love

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    Stryx commented on Who am I

    09-30-2009

    Very sensitive, nice metaphor - like its feel. Nice work.
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    dragonheart1 commented on Who am I

    06-28-2009

    Parts fo this poem I like.but love is not the creator of death.It however can leardone astray but true love never dies.It lives!
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    Richisfun commented on Who am I

    06-07-2009

    China, i dont like the way this ends, i am love, love is not the creator of death, love can not lead you astray, but anyway just according to my views about love, hope u understand
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    MsKrystle commented on Who am I

    06-06-2009

    So true, love can do so many things to you. It is supposed to be a beautiful thing but it can cause pain too. I like this one, nice work
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    Reallady65 commented on Who am I

    06-04-2009

    SO MUCH passion illustrated in so few words. Great job. I can relate and sincerely enjoyed this one.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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