Breathless

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    Breathless

    There comes a time in everyone life
    when they meet that special someone
    who changes their life,
    who makes the sun shine
    just a little bit brighter
    who makes its rain
    just a little bit lighter
    who smile melts all your troubles away
    whose voice is sweeter than that of a dove
    and softer than velvet ice.
    At each deafening moment, and with each breath that I take,
    each minute that I store in the bottle of time
    I want you there my love,
    forever and ever
    until my last breath.

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    Richisfun commented on Breathless

    10-11-2010

    Very beautiful, very romantic and perfectly written what is love; love= Lots Of Vibrational Energy

    jimsdaone commented on Breathless

    07-06-2009

    ur words sound like they come from ur heart, the true reality of life deserves more explaining, but we get no explanations, we only give expressions, with our words, Beautiful Heart, words, & soul, U R Alive inside sweetheart, let it out, the world will enjoy ur poems

    godfatherguy88 commented on Breathless

    07-06-2009

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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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