SCREAM

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SCREAM

From the depths of my soul comes the sounds of torment and ridicule.
I am defiant they say, a absolute worthless case.
At the blows of hatred and constant insults, I dare not defend myself
from the shadow that watches me constantly.... I only fear the worst.
shall I be the first to die, or be share an internal thirst.
I dare you to scream he says, know-one will hear your cries,
my tears find me silent, and sadness overcome my eyes.
Through the numerous moons, I only pray for redemption,
while my muffle screams reside in hell.

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WordChallenged commented on SCREAM

06-29-2009

Unbelievably visual. I feel your emotion through your choice of words and flow.

Grito commented on SCREAM

06-08-2009

Looking up from the bottom of a deep well can be overwhelming. There are so many ways to go, so much pressure to conform, to realize oneself. But, with God's grace, there is redemption and strength.

brandon commented on SCREAM

06-07-2009

that was really good i got the message you were saying in it you dont have to be afraid i understand completely good job

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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