Fear

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    Fear

     WAKE UP! Fear binds us all to the stalls of hell, with muffled screams we yell
    Break the chains that binds us all and soon we will not be able to fall, from the passions of our utmost dreams, to what seems like a lifetime the window is stained with crimson streaks of my pain.
    Feel me and dare to look into my soul
    Can you reach me before I fall into the cold depths of my own tomb.
    I want to wake up from oppression, hate, judgment, and escape the fear of my own nightmares.
    Breath ........

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    Chaos128 commented on Fear

    08-25-2009

    You've got a knack for dark (if not despairing) verse. I've said this to other poets, but it's my philosophy, and my story doesn't change depending on who I'm talking to. It kind of limits your choice when you dwell in a room where only dark things are available. Look inside, you've got your own light, and it's brighter than you'd ever believe possible.
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    Lolee commented on Fear

    07-28-2009

    I hate those kinds of dreams, thanks for being so good at writing that you took me back there...thanks a lot! lol. You did a very nice job on this.
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    Richisfun commented on Fear

    06-07-2009

    Yes fear is the absent of Love, and falling into your own depths of of the tomb, i want to critique you but i cant , you are good keep going
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    lovinsmind commented on Fear

    05-26-2009

    wow! i really like this more a spoken word than the regular poetry that seems to clutter this site all the time. i enjoyed readin this and hope to read more to come.
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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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