Hell

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    Hell


    From the depths of hell i rise,
    defiant until God's will,
    dont try to run, your soul is mine,
    dont scream, your breathing is obsolete here,
    sweet surrender, is the both painless and shameless,
    or shall you run like the coward you are.
    What are the rules?
    Anything goes.. lying, cheating, lust, death, and murder can be all seen here, with no return to the mortal world
    which is heaven or which is hell,
    where are you? look above to see angels wings, perhaps you should look down, my black winged angels will fly you there to a world of purgatory and constant pain.
    You had your chance. All the scriptures in heaven cannot save you now.
    You are mine .
    Your soul belongs to me.
    Lets eat.Bone apatite.
    Welcome to hell.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Hell

    08-09-2009

    hey i'm sorry i have not commented on this sooner......this is excellent and i truly appriciate such a well thought out answer to my challenge..... a 10

    Lolee commented on Hell

    07-28-2009

    Interesting. What are they going to eat? Maybe soul food? lol This was a well thought out poem, thanks for sharing.

    MsKrystle commented on Hell

    06-06-2009

    I like this, I've read other welcome to hell poems. I want to write my own but cant seem to put the words together the way I want them. Nice work

    Wonxxtnz commented on Hell

    06-04-2009

    i didnt realize that such imagery of God & demons hells angels & scripture ran prevalance through japanese culture.... but i like it .... i live there....ahhhh home

    avengingangel commented on Hell

    06-04-2009

    hmm that is very interesting good job as always keep it up lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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