Breath of Fire (Haiku)

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    for Madelynn ... thx for calling me out, Darlin'! Luv! -dh(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

    Breath of Fire (Haiku)

     You are my fire –

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    StandingBear commented on Breath of Fire (Haiku)

    01-08-2010

    Such a quaint haiku for our own, dear sweet madelynn!
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    dancinghawk

    01/08/2010

    lol! she is deserving, with her compassion and gentle fiery spirit ... ty for the visit, StandingBear! -dh

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Breath of Fire (Haiku)

    12-07-2009

    THIS SOUNDS GOOD SOMETHING A SOUL MATE MIGHT SAY SWEET BUT SHORT GETS THE POINT ACROSS
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    dancinghawk

    12/07/2009

    souls meeting everywhere all the time ... but some are more fiery than others, lol ... ty for reading and commenting, Bettysrainbow48! -dh

    stellar commented on Breath of Fire (Haiku)

    11-25-2009

    A short and a very passionate poem...I love this one
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    dancinghawk

    11/25/2009

    thx, stellar! going to check out your new posts now :) -dh

    Madelynn commented on Breath of Fire (Haiku)

    11-14-2009

    "A Haiku written by any other poetess, would not read so sweet!" You never need called out, Spiritess, as your very presence is felt with a constant illumination of your written gifts! Yes, however true, I needed my Dh fix-what can I say, I am addicted to living legends of this craft,aka-You,dearest one! Now this piece, Dh, with complete sincerity~Sisterheart, you have taken my breath away!!
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    dancinghawk

    11/14/2009

    oh, ty, Darling ... i have been looking forward to your read ever since i posted, lol ... truly, it was your nudge that inspired me to finish this piece ... i always make notes (all but the last line was written weeks ago) ... but sometimes i need a request to turn it in :) ty again ... -dh

    zorbica commented on Breath of Fire (Haiku)

    11-14-2009

    *********radiant, passionate, wonderful!!*********
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    dancinghawk

    11/14/2009

    yay! ty!

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