The Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
The boy, he fell asleep, andThe Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
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based on a true story, in my own neighborhood; going thru some old journals, digging up weird pieces :) (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com
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rsalassi commented on The Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
12-26-2010
- Intriguing little piece, leaving the reader to wonder who died, the dog or the boy. Excellent write.
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12/28/2010
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Marsink commented on The Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
03-22-2010
- Dedicated to the faithful and barking one who gave his life for the boy of his loyal life. Short and full of fire and ice!
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03/22/2010
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Springsize commented on The Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
03-21-2010
- well, I have only begun to read your poems, finding first the love thoughts sent for Grandmother, I so loved mine... and then I see a poem about the stark fire, evoking awfulness... Noticing your comment to stellar that you have another, more indepth version ... loyalty and bravery and heroic dog would add to the existing sentiments, to me....... a message that is a view of carlessness, I believe we need to have a lot more watch over the children, like mother hens. This is a Good View, Important for our human species to survive, as we must Be There to Guide ... !!!!
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03/21/2010
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stellar commented on The Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
03-19-2010
- Wow...what a trait...We have also this story in our neighborhood and it is true,,,the difference is that the dogs really save the life of their master...he doesn't have wife only 14 dogs..it is his family...nice...^_^ v
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03/19/2010
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dahlusion commented on The Dog, He Barks No More (A Vinegar Flats Story)
03-18-2010
- ..in and out so fast with such an emotional charge; I hope the bong survived...this one hauled me through each line from the first letter to the final period. Bravo!!
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03/18/2010
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