Storm Comin'

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    (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

    Storm Comin'

     Shadows move;

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    poetgirl04 commented on Storm Comin'

    01-01-2010

    i like how you were able to convey the image one gets from a storm, in a short and concise piece. good job.
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    dancinghawk

    01/04/2010

    i thought there might be more to this one when i sat down to write it, but the image was so clear in my head that it seemed complete as soon as i wrote it down, lol ... ty for the note and the visit, poetgirl04! -dh

    WordSlinger commented on Storm Comin'

    01-01-2010

    love it, when this happens it tells me I'll be busy repairing homes, ty WS
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    dancinghawk

    01/04/2010

    lol! luv it -dh

    danmartyjake1 commented on Storm Comin'

    11-26-2009

    Interesting short mix conjours up familiar feelings....
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    dancinghawk

    11/29/2009

    a quick capture :) ty for the note! -dh

    stellar commented on Storm Comin'

    11-25-2009

    I love the contradictions...dancing on the asphalt, clear as night///REally lovely...I love the kind of mystery it evokes upon me..
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    dancinghawk

    11/25/2009

    lol ... it's more like something you'd write, totally ... luv that observation ... ty again for the read and the thoughtful comment! -dh

    gogant commented on Storm Comin'

    10-24-2009

    As the dance sways -- so goes the wind in our mind, the unseen becomes viewable, and we lavish its presence. There is a lot more to these few lines than what one could imagine, Dancer...........................................................................................g
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    dancinghawk

    10/25/2009

    thx for your insight, gogant!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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