A Valentine's Eve Vision

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    ... much love ... -dh (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

    A Valentine's Eve Vision

     Two herons appeared in the east -

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    MalikPeterson commented on A Valentine's Eve Vision

    02-18-2010

    I have never given so much thought to two birds flying until now. I thank you for opening my eyes to more than just what's on the surface...bird flight...has been changed for me forever :) The Kudos dh...they are over there...go collect them :)
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    dancinghawk

    02/21/2010

    sweet ... all energy connected ... metaphors ... all around us all the time ... ! ... ty for visiting and writing, Darlin'! -dh

    SavVySam commented on A Valentine's Eve Vision

    02-18-2010

    Always thought provoking and meaningful words from the insights of one dancinghawk! Very nice, Lady!;)
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    dancinghawk

    02/21/2010

    sweet! ty! -dh

    ginga commented on A Valentine's Eve Vision

    02-17-2010

    DH, Simply a wonderful observation of nature that takes these two on separate paths and we can only hope to be reunited. ginga
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    dancinghawk

    02/18/2010

    united in purpose ... but, indeed, united in form is the most tangibly satisfying ... may all free spirits receive what they need! much love to you! -dh

    Charlie23 commented on A Valentine's Eve Vision

    02-16-2010

    I love the thoughts within your writing, dh! This is absolutely beautiful, in writing as well as the images that come to mind!
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    dancinghawk

    02/16/2010

    it was beautiful to see ... ty so much for the visit!! -dh

    stellar commented on A Valentine's Eve Vision

    02-14-2010

    Wow...I love your version...A Valentine's Eve...I can relate so much both the literal birds for there are many herons here in our place...I like these creatures they can be with the crowd but they are solitary animals...and the meaning...Well this wakes emotion in me especially this line "Together, we can't always be physically-but together we can be in purpose." yah know my father is a seaman abroad for a living and my mother is just at home taking care with us...but it just always it..."sacrifice, sacrifice" for all good things got high price"...Really so much story is awakened in my self by this so brief poem...
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    dancinghawk

    02/14/2010

    oh that's so excellent, that there are many herons with you! and what a great context you've shared ... that is sacrifice, on all sides ... i'm so glad this speaks to you, and really appreciate hearing what it brings up for you ... it's so interesting to me, how your and WS's impressions make this story richer and more layered ... and luv your "saying" i've never heard that one before, sacrifice, sacrifice ... ty so much for the visit and the thoughtful note, stellar ... -dh

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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