Clutter

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    the last of 2010, lol ... on to 2011 ... happy New Year, everyone! (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

    Clutter

     The re-arranging piles

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    RHPeat commented on Clutter

    01-13-2011

    Oh do I know this//// Rearranging my status in my bones for the third time, the book is getting harder to read. The awkwardness of the chair does not relent. I look for the energy in the disolving word to awaken my blood. But squinted eyes are greeted by the mesmerization of the slow dribble inside scientific thought. The heap awaits my wants, yet the stack increases with every turn in the stream. The shadows hidden in expectations grow into monsters while my determination dwindles to speak with ants. Somehow sleep grabs my head and wrestles me down to twist me prone on the couch. And once again I awake to say: "Where was I?" The knot in the line has loosened and the dingy is now far adrift again. A poet friend// RH Peat
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    dancinghawk

    01/14/2011

    sometimes rest, indeed, is all we need to make it all look right ... perspective is ... everything ... love this (rocking?) chair vignette on concentration ... ty, poet friend! -dh

    RHPeat

    01/14/2011

    Does the stack ever really dwindle. it seems as fast as we dig into them something is adding another in the line. :-) A great poem you have here.

    MindNumbing commented on Clutter

    01-11-2011

    Very thought provoking for such a shorty, DH! The clutter and chaos of thoughts that tend to scatter about in the mind, only to be reeled in by the most diligent of thinkers, is what I immediately thought of when reading. Nicely written and thanks for making my brain work :)
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    dancinghawk

    01/12/2011

    nice connection, MindNumbing! love it ... and thx for the read and the note! -dh

    stellar commented on Clutter

    01-11-2011

    lol...order from chaos...it me made me think about I can't write a poem when my room is chaotic...
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    dancinghawk

    01/11/2011

    lol! :) and STELLAR! yay! i've been tooling around the last couple of days and thought of you last night and was planning to check your page today ... you beat me, lol ... but i'll still get over there ... happy new year to you! -dh

    dahlusion commented on Clutter

    01-10-2011

    Ah! The time it takes to organize chaos is never equal to the time it takes to create chaos, and like angels, you hands fluttered through the heap only to produce bliss—I hope! A stellar write in only a few words. Bravo!!!!!!!
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    dancinghawk

    01/10/2011

    awww, ty so much, Dah! lol ... like twinkling one's nose ... would that it were always so easy ;) much love! -dh

    StandingBear commented on Clutter

    01-09-2011

    DancingHawk, your organized chaos sounds absolutely soothing. StandingBear
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    dancinghawk

    01/10/2011

    ha! all an illusion, either way, i'm afraid, lol :) Happy New Year, StandingBear! -dh

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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