The Big Bang Is Not History
MarsVenus
One compressed everything,
and then
BANG
e x p a n d i n g
but still
The Big Bang Is Not History
16 Comments
Tags: Expanding Universe
Poem Commentary
ty to LW for the seed thought ...(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.comVenus
One compressed everything,
and then
BANG
e x p a n d i n g
but still
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Poem Comments
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icu2 commented on The Big Bang Is Not History
12-28-2009
- My goodness! This is quite a poem! Yes, the web is set in motion...now let's just see the end results. Will it all blow up in our faces someday? BOOM! Or...maybe it already has...and it's just getting bigger, as you say. So awesomly done!
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12/28/2009
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gogant commented on The Big Bang Is Not History
12-26-2009
- It is interesting to think on the theory that the universe is moving away from us (we here on earth) at an awesome pace...but what if there is another one of us...would a being on some far away planet have the same theory ? Just pondering after reading your poem, Dancer....................................gogant
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12/26/2009
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jademelissa74 commented on The Big Bang Is Not History
12-23-2009
- Wow! A thought-provoking piece, filled with metaphoric content that makes you spin. There is so much meaning at face value. You own much talent and charisma :)) Thank you for posting. Merry Christmas to you and yours~
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12/23/2009
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MalikPeterson commented on The Big Bang Is Not History
12-20-2009
- This is a good one dh...I understand about the web and all but I also looked at it as a metaphor for humanity and the reproduction dance we do on daily basis causing daily expansion...you know...women are from mars and men are from venus lol...so indeed you have inspired depth in thinking with this one...May the Kudos be with you forever!!!!
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SavVySam commented on The Big Bang Is Not History
12-19-2009
- There is so much to this fantastic write, that my mind is spinning wheels trying to gather momentum! Inexhaustible potential for discussion here! Some very deep thinking went into this significant piece! Just an awesome poem my friend!
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12/20/2009
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