I was born with worker-bee markings

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    :) (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

    I was born with worker-bee markings

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    Hampton commented on I was born with worker-bee markings

    11-04-2010

    ..and you are....a very clever and creative poet.....Hampton

    dancinghawk

    11/09/2010

    aww, ty ... i feel like i must have industrial-strength markings these days, lol, so much going on ... ty for taking the time to read and leave such a thoughtful note :) -dh

    Olan01 commented on I was born with worker-bee markings

    10-12-2010

    We have a kindred energy or self, not ego but original self/true self. My view is similar; I am; I think; I do. Well stated and get to the heart of life. As for living in nature I feel the same; at one with nature. At one with the creatures of the sea and of the land. My totem is the Tiger/Liger and puma. I had a visions of all of them and we are one. The latest vision was of Puma standing beside me; we were close, friend and family. Love, peace and freedom, Olan

    dancinghawk

    10/14/2010

    we share a cat cnxn :) i once had a vivid, heart-racing dream that i ran out of the house in search of meat ... and turned into a panterh ... i can still feel the physical sensation, the firing of the muscles, the reaching and leaping for the next furlong of feline intensity ... and when i arrived at my neighbor's, they had a cup of raw redness waiting for me, lol ... others as well, tho that's the most vivid, certainly ... ha, and the Liger, lol, i have him on my fridge :) thx for this lovely surprise note, Olan01! -dh

    kdarcy commented on I was born with worker-bee markings

    07-25-2010

    Speak and make it so, follow the sunrise to the sunset ... for YOU ARE. Nice .......

    dancinghawk

    07/27/2010

    oh, you totally get it, lol ... one in one's dharma is a powerful presence ... ty for the read and the note! -dh

    kdarcy

    07/27/2010

    Afterall, it was a good read, be well

    Tigcateyes commented on I was born with worker-bee markings

    07-10-2010

    I keep checking out your work and keep getting blown away with your ability. This is so powerful, so wonderful, so even cute. :) So utterly simple, yet so complex and story it tells. Keep it up!

    dancinghawk

    07/11/2010

    love that you love this :) :) ty again for the read and the generous note! -dh

    SILKYTWEED commented on I was born with worker-bee markings

    07-10-2010

    Brilliant Power Packed Short Write....that is infinite in meaning..well done...Namaste!

    dancinghawk

    07/11/2010

    love that you love this! ;) and see more than one story, aho ... -dh

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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