Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

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all the adventure of an early summer walk along the creek ... and circles within circles within circles ... :) namaste! (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

Sunset under the bridge:
golden dragonfly lights on a rock, and
ponders.

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rosehunter commented on Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

01-10-2011

I really like this one! It's very colorful and the use of noise does a lot for the composition of this poem. I love the use of "bullet-train" as a verb. Really awesome.

dancinghawk

01/10/2011

:) sweet! i so wanted to capture that magical summer buzz ... winters can be so longer here, lol ... ty so much for the generous note and your time and energy in reading! -dh

rsalassi commented on Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

12-26-2010

Fantasia-like imagery without the music. Excellent write.

dancinghawk

12/28/2010

wonderful! it lives on in my memory as a golden summer dusk ...

Hampton commented on Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

11-04-2010

A creation of visualizations that are just down-right charming

dancinghawk

11/09/2010

awesome! ty, Hampton! -dh

gogant commented on Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

10-16-2010

What a visual effect of a piece of nature at peace you have sculpted with your beautiful poetic words, Dancer...........Ohhh, so lovely..................................................gogant

dancinghawk

10/20/2010

gogant! yay! i'm so glad you found this mid-summer meditation! ty so much for reading and leaving such a lovely note! -dh

Olan01 commented on Ten Gnats and the Golden Dragonfly

10-07-2010

A very visual nature write and a very good poem. This is what poetry is about. Olan

dancinghawk

10/08/2010

love that you like this! ;) the visceral through the intellect, always a challenge ... thx for the read and the note! -dh

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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