The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
Your children gathered to mourn your passing, and the sun rose and set just as any other day.The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
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(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com
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Springsize commented on The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
03-21-2010
- You write as you comment, you live in a peacewant view, this dedication to your grandmother reminds me of all I love who leave before me... I like your circle within circle... that is just soo nice, and then connecting it to the ripples of all ... ... I see your name is a mirror of your views....
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03/21/2010
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jademelissa74 commented on The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
03-19-2010
- This poem is beautiful. It is a heartfelt tribute to your Grandmother...Oh, how I miss mine :( You have made my day with this piece. Thank you so much!
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03/19/2010
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stellar commented on The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
03-19-2010
- Wow...this is lovely and oh breath taking poem...another way of looking at life and death..so much wisdom in it...^_^ v
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03/19/2010
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dahlusion commented on The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
03-18-2010
- "the Bleeding Heart awoke at dawn, blooming red out of season" — a lusciously poetic line! And then this mystical beauty, "Circle within circle within circle, our passing ripples to every atom in the universe". You are such a loving, spiritual force. A heart-felt write. Bravo!!
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03/18/2010
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Teardrops commented on The Bleeding Heart (for Grandma C.)
03-17-2010
- Wish all would send there loved ones on with such a poem of phrase thanks for the love you show Marie
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03/18/2010
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