Part Two: The Meditation

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taking the advice to post these in separate pieces ... experiment if these stand alone? ... this is Part 2 of 3 parts in The Warrior, The Meditation, The Red Road ... thx!(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

Part Two: The Meditation

Part Two: The Meditation

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dahlusion commented on Part Two: The Meditation

02-04-2010

This is a breathlessly stunning piece of poetry depicting a meditating moment. I relate completely.

dancinghawk

02/04/2010

Dah! i luv that you've been sifting thru the already-posted work ... ty so much for your note ... i've modified the formatting of this piece a bit in later versions (the chapbook etc.) and i find that the init caps in this are distracting, lol ... but ty for hearing the story despite the distractions ... this is definitely among the moments that are emblazoned on my psyche ... much love! -dh

Stryx commented on Part Two: The Meditation

10-23-2009

So very well done. I think we are only here, in this time, to forgive. You focus on it with laser like sharpness.

dancinghawk

10/23/2009

excellent ... it does open doors, certainly, LOL ... ty for your thoughtful note!

graceladymn commented on Part Two: The Meditation

10-18-2009

Stands alone as well. This piece tells of memory from another time brought forth into healing in this life. Wonderful, forgiveness is a bountiful tool of wisdom to apply to all wounds.

dancinghawk

10/18/2009

one of the basics, for sure ... and ty for your input, that it works on its own ... "1" and "2" were written so close together that i wasn't sure if they could be separated ... really good to know this tells its own story ...

Grito commented on Part Two: The Meditation

10-14-2009

To contemplate tau, tau minus, quarks, and now she is healed by forgiveness.

dancinghawk

10/14/2009

indeed ...

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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