The Lady With the Lamp

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Hello, Friends in Poetry! I have here a poem written by my dad within the last week ... I'm temporarily working from Roseville, Minnesota, staying with my grandparents (88 and 91!). A couple of weeks ago my grandmother called me The Lady with the Lamp, and my dad wrote this beautiful piece that is making me cry all over the place :) I wanted to share it here ... Thx, Dad! Much love! -dh (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

The Lady With the Lamp

Hello, Friends in Poetry!

I have here a poem written by my dad within the last week ... I'm in Roseville, Minnesota, with my grandparents (88 and 91!). A couple of weeks ago my grandmother called me The Lady with the Lamp, and my dad wrote this beautiful piece that is making me cry all over the place :) I wanted to share it here ... Thx, Dad! Much love! -dh

The Lady With the Lamp


When times are tough and we are down, there is a myth of wide renown:

As home fires fade and the kindling’s damp, here comes the Lady With the Lamp.

She brings a warmth and energy, a light that brightens all we see.

As hope returns and spirits rise, we soon begin to realize

The Lady With the Lamp is here to overcome despair and fear,

Reminding us to hope and pray for help to find a better way

To meet the many tests we face, with resolve and steady grace.

The Lady With the Lamp is more than just a maid of local lore.

Her little lamp, though very bright, represents a greater, larger light.

And though we may not understand the source of every helping hand,

We have a feeling in our heart that her compassion is a part

Of a universal earthly love that we were given from above.

Life is full of mysteries that compensate for frailties,

And one to help us up the ramp is the Lady With the Lamp.


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rsalassi commented on The Lady With the Lamp

12-26-2010

An inspirational piece for everyone to heed. Excellent write.

dancinghawk

12/28/2010

my dad will be pleased; thx for the thoughtful note, rsalassi! -dh

blackfootlady commented on The Lady With the Lamp

12-01-2010

This not a Poem,lol It is a work of ART! very well compose.I enjoyed this Emmensely.God Bless-Black P.s.Saved to favorites.

dancinghawk

12/03/2010

i'll pass your note on to my dad ... ty so much for reading and leaving such a lovely note, blackfootlady! -dh

soulwriter commented on The Lady With the Lamp

11-30-2010

Simply and honestly - my words of appreciation are to is to agree with your expression of affection "Thank you DAD"

dancinghawk

12/01/2010

ty, soulwriter! -dh

Hampton commented on The Lady With the Lamp

11-04-2010

Words to be cherished. A lovely poem.....................Hampton

dancinghawk

11/09/2010

thx, Hampton! this style reminds me of yours a bit ;) thx for stopping by, Darlin'! -dh

kkirkwood commented on The Lady With the Lamp

10-21-2010

Great poem very touching. Just let your light keep shining.

dancinghawk

10/26/2010

:) will do my best, kkirkwood, and backatcha ;) -dh

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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