Bull Dreamin'

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    (c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

    Bull Dreamin'
    I woke from a dream
    and, in waking,
    Was in a dream.

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    stellar commented on Bull Dreamin'

    11-17-2009

    This is a very sweet nostalgia that I can even feel the emotion of the child...Lovely ^_^ v
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    dancinghawk

    11/17/2009

    lol ... sweet bulls :) -dh

    Madelynn commented on Bull Dreamin'

    11-05-2009

    Lovin the weirdness!LOL- Dreams are such a window to-that something else, we just cant put together at times. Ill tell ya-even something so out of the norm,as this, you write visually killer! You are such a force to be reckoned with in this poetic land! You always-Im mean ALWAYS, blow me away!
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    dancinghawk

    11/05/2009

    sweet Madelynn! thx for your thoughtful note ... dreamland is a great window to metaphor ... everything with many meanings ... thx for your visit!! :)

    JCKasper commented on Bull Dreamin'

    10-26-2009

    The eeriness of living inside of a dream displaying a vivid imagination ...... Love the Title!
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    dancinghawk

    10/26/2009

    ty!

    oldaubry commented on Bull Dreamin'

    10-24-2009

    I really like this! Is the format for this of a classic style? I am not very well versed (no pun intended, lol!) in the many standard stylesof poetry, and when asked to classify my works, I always try to be safe and say free verse,lol! It looks to be a very definitive format and the imagery is very poignant because of it.
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    dancinghawk

    10/24/2009

    ty for that! it is not consciously like a classic style, but i do believe in pattern recognition, so try to incorporate that in the written word (as well as the spoken) ... often the line breaks do not come thru on the pieces i post here, lol! i'm glad they did on this one ... i try to create emphasis, and symmetry, with the spacing ... and that practice often helps me finish a piece, to round it out and tighten it up ...

    SavVySam commented on Bull Dreamin'

    10-24-2009

    I appreciate the open spirited and simplistic manner with which you write. You've left my imagination a wide birth for assigning many possible interpretations in this poem! (dancinghawk is flying high!) Take care!
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    dancinghawk

    10/24/2009

    aho! ty!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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