Jack is dead

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    Jack is dead

     

    Jack is dead
    Jack is dead

    Where have you gone
    My father-like friend
    When I want to call you
    And hear your gravely voice
    You old marine
    Did you ever really return
    From the war in the pacific or
    Were you just passing time
    Until you could go to sleep
    All the booze and the late nights
    And the cigarettes and the run- ins with forgone celebrities telling stories
    at bar sides after two AM in Manhattan
    You wore your Marine Corps watch
    And held your chest high and I never heard you complain because you lived through the worst of the worst and all else was a gift
    That you chose your days with drink in hand was your business for I know that you killed many in battle and were spared the big death in your twenties  -was just what it was my old friend
    I've dreamt of you for some reason in the past few nights  my pal 
    But tonight your memory and absence has brought me to tears 
    You live in my heart and I miss you terribly.

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    MiaH commented on Jack is dead

    07-19-2009

    Unreal, really.... I love this poem and I hate the fact that I have to write 50 characters to tell you so!

    StandingBear commented on Jack is dead

    07-19-2009

    A nicely written dedication relating your father - like friend. Great write.

    ginga commented on Jack is dead

    07-15-2009

    A true dedication to a wonderful friend. It makes me feel as though I have missed something not knowing Jack since this poem is so powerfully written. Ginga

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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