Slainte

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    Slainte

    Slainte

    Waiting my turn to go on stage to recite
    poetry at the place next door ..... 

    Big Brown won the Kentucky Derby

    by 4 1-2 lengths.

    Runner up, Eight-Bells, broke both front ankles after

    crossing the wire and was euthanized on the track.

     

    The Irish bar Slainte ( cheers) next to the Bowery Poetry Club is where I watched the race.

    It was a good race and won by Big Brown's raw power as he came out of the

    crowded pack of dirt digging beast muscle on the club house turn in fourth to take it .

    Eight-Bells killed himself trying to beat Big Brown.

      

    The poets inside the poetry club

    were all getting ready and they mostly had black shirts and crazy tattoos and face piercings

    and just were trying too hard to appear apart from.

     

    The people out side were saying "I wonder whats going on inside there?"...

    like poets are some kind of other earthy creatures.

     

    I stayed next door at the Irish bar and ordered deep fried mushrooms drank dark beer,

    Irish coffee and I wrote this poem .

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    Tempestlady commented on Slainte

    10-10-2009

    Sad realism in compitition for success, and difference. Made me wonder if any of it mattered anyway, really? And you somewhere in the middle. Sure made me think...Write on...

    BridgetBowen commented on Slainte

    08-19-2009

    This is marvelous. Although I do consider myself an other worldly creature...it is apart from my poetry. The whole art of being outside the norm is to not let anyone see it on the outside but to live it. You my friend are living it. Love this.

    lightcourier commented on Slainte

    07-03-2009

    Ahhhh, to live or talk about cool living. There's no comparison. Nice contrast between the authentic and artificial contrivanced images. Beautiful! Thanks!

    WordSlinger commented on Slainte

    06-29-2009

    Witty, funny, and intelligent. I admire ya, and horses, so we more than poetry in common. We are other creatures.

    laydbak1 commented on Slainte

    06-29-2009

    you have a crazy, but masterful way with story telling that brings someone right inside your mind movie... i couldn't quite taste the dark beer, but i certainly did smell those fresh out of the oil sh'rooms about to be woofed down... a simple, no real plot story, but it sure worked for me.... good one....

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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