War of the Seasons

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    War of the Seasons

    War of the Seasons

     

    The eastbound winds blowing hard from the countries mid-west chugged grey wintry clouds through the Chrysler Buildings stainless steel spire.

     

    Like an ocean going freighter they lumbered by endlessly.

     

    In between the darkened train of winters last trail shot sun bursts through holes of blue that caused squints as the arrows of rays ricocheted off of the towers into unguarded eyes.

     

    To see the big battleship clouds fire out burst of white snow flakes against the dueling skies made for wonder as the seasons jousted for control of the world above the city.

     

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    Rhymer commented on War of the Seasons

    12-17-2009

    Once again an excellent write show casing your talent and ability to deliver the reader an ability to visually perceive the world through your written word.
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    Tempestlady commented on War of the Seasons

    11-22-2009

    I would have done it in stanza's. I think it would be more poignant because the reader would have to pause and therefore pick up more meaning. A sunny snow was what i thought of, and all the glistening and dichotomy that it would create. Beautiful just beautiful. Write on......
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    BlaQReign commented on War of the Seasons

    10-11-2009

    Your screen name definitely fits your style...It draws a visual that is stunning....I'm enjoying your pens...BlaQ
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    dancinghawk commented on War of the Seasons

    10-06-2009

    "arrows of rays ricocheted" ... and i see there's a train in this one, LOL ... musta been drawn to this today ... love this subtle "nature vs. human" and the wonder in the interstitial spaces ...
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    chrysanthemum commented on War of the Seasons

    09-20-2009

    woww amazing, you chose great verbs and adjectives for ths
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