Shame

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    Shame

    Living in a world full
    Of uncertainty
    I would like to believe, at least
    In you and me.
    But, as I thought
    With you,
    It's not.

    Crumbling
    This structure sits
    On broken ground
    Where deceit
    Leads to shame
    As you cast aside
    My feelings
    Of worth.

    Without a load of bricks
    To carry in my sack
    Would I still walk
    With a bent back
    Of shame.

    7-24-09

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    soulwriter commented on Shame

    07-26-2009

    The daily burden for us all to carry is living in this world of uncertainty - sometimes the written word suffices as the feather that we have to exchange for the load of lead that sometimes seems to be clued to our backs. Your crumbling structure is being rebuilt with the strength gained through the craft of your words.
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    frog

    08/01/2009

    I loved how you said that. Thank you.

    dragonfly1023 commented on Shame

    07-25-2009

    to present a failed relationship in the terms of a crumbling structure and bearing its burden like a sack of bricks, is a great analogy frog. the answer to your question, is no. drop the sack... and rise :D
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    frog

    07/26/2009

    You are so right. Sometimes it just helps to write about the feelings to help me make the better choice. Thank you for your encouragement.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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